IDK any sugestions? short childrens Story

There once was an Enormous elephant and he was calling his mom to dinner. But she didn't say any thing. So Carl (name of the son) went looking for his mom Sally. Then Carl heard her sceam "HELP!" Carl rushed to were Sally was. She was surrounded by houndreds of small mice. There was silence for a while. Then Carl saw the king mouse. he was sitting on a rock scarfing dowm chips like there was no tommorow. Carl wanted to be heroic but he was afaid of mice. So he got an idea, he pretended to be a hawk and scared the mice away the king mouse took the longest to get away because he was so FAT. Carl came to his mom but she couldn't walk because she had a fracture in her leg. So Carl saw some garlic and put it under his mom and rolled her to safety. All the other elephants were happy and had plenty of gratitude toward Carl.

THE END?