Wednesday, July 25, 2007
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It was the first time I've seen one of such radiant beauty before. How the white spots upon her glistened in the mid-afternoon light showing through the already crescent moon. It's withered bones looked haggard as she ran past us. The brown shown covering her flesh was not just a brown, it was a creamy sensation waiting to be forgotten. Her hoofs stumbled as she passed, leaving only the memory of such indescribable feelings behind her. The car screeched to a halt as all we could do was gaze at this lovely creature. Then as if by magic she slowly disappeared into the darkness.
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Very lush imagery...but one line gives me pause. It seems that the majority of the paragraph praises the horse (or whatever), but the word choice in the 3rd sentence seems to say otherwise. Does this paragraph need to be in the context of the rest of the piece for it to fit?
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