Thursday, August 2, 2007

What if? -Tori C.

What if
Th sun exploded?
What if
The world ended?
What if
The troops never came home?
What if
There was no technology?
What if
There was life on mars?
What if
You fell asleep and never woke up?
What if
You were a superhero?
What if
It rained blood?
Would it heal us?
Would it destroy us?
What if?

5 comments:

Rachelle said...

I like it. its very to the point!

Jen A. said...

Very deep. The question format of it leaves the poem very open to ideas and theories, and is very thought inspiring.

Victoria Anne said...

I like it..


It has very good Questions.

Emily said...

i really like that, it's well thought out and there's a lot of meaning to it.

Wacky Jacky said...

I love it!! It makes you really wonder. It is very powerful, though, it is very simple.