Thursday, August 2, 2007

Voices, Tori C.

My friends,
My family,
My loved,
My departed,
The bells are
Ringing,
It's time
Too see
What lies
Beyond
Our vision.
Is it our
Death?
Is it our
Future?
Is it our
Loved?
Who is calling?
Whispering my
Name,
So omniously.
But I know
It is a fimiliar
Voice
Yet it's so
Mysterious
I think it is
My own.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great job!! It's very deep. It seems to really come from your heart, and that is the kind of poetry I like, when it comes from the heart. Keep doing what you are doing! You're on the right path!:):):) Brava!!

Jen A. said...

This is really good! The language is simple, yet expressive, and I like that a lot.